I just finished writing this poem. How you do find it? Honest answers please. Will she love this? Please suggest a title too.
Love is when beauty and fragrance combine,
Growing into an adorable flower,
Though have their own significance,
It’s together that they shine!
Love is when the seven colours unite,
Shaping into an alluring rainbow,
Though have their respective significance,
It’s together that they enlight!
Love is when we stay together,
Bound together we belong,
Despite of all the pain and tears,
It’s together that we prolong!
Dude you got my own girl liking you cuz of your poem lol. Next time im blocking yer poems lol jking. Awesome poem, i think you should know the answer for that… I know i do lol. i was just old "why dont i write something like that"from the miss sitting here
Dude you got my own girl liking you cuz of your poem lol. Next time im blocking yer poems lol jking. Awesome poem, i think you should know the answer for that… I know i do lol. i was just old "why dont i write something like that"from the miss sitting here
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I think it is wonderful
, the only lines that could maybe be changed are Bound together we belong and It’s together we’ll prolong. (Because I think they sound out of place, and bound is a very strong word.) Well done though I think she’ll love it.
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That’s very lovely and entrancing, Nothing N. It is beautifully sweet and amazingly pasionate and romantic. Nice job, keep up good work. Yes, guarenteed that she will love it!
Hope I Helped!
~Drummerchick
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